The third world people need a little time concern in our city life
(第三世界需要我們城市生活當中,少許時間的關心)
文法有錯嗎?
如果修改得愈短愈好,thx
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2009-06-16 12:07 am
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2009-06-16 2:54 am
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連中文都唔係好得,我盡短喇,14個字.People in the third world need little time of concern from city-living people, us.
2009-06-16 5:49 am
The third world people need a little time concern in our city life
(第三世界需要我們城市生活當中,少許時間的關心)
People who live in the third world need luckier ones who live in cities like us
to show them some concern.
or
People living in the third world need luckier ones living in cities
to show them some concern. ( shorter )
Bye
(第三世界需要我們城市生活當中,少許時間的關心)
People who live in the third world need luckier ones who live in cities like us
to show them some concern.
or
People living in the third world need luckier ones living in cities
to show them some concern. ( shorter )
Bye
2009-06-16 1:12 am
2009-06-16 12:12 am
文法就冇錯, 不過唔夠"道地".
供參考, 請高人指
Amongst the hustle and bustle of our city life, we should also spare a little time to care about people in the third world.
2009-06-15 16:13:00 補充：
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Amongst the hustle and bustle of our city life, we should also spare a little time to care about people in the third world.
2009-06-15 16:13:00 補充：
供參考, 請高人指正
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