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The climax of the story was Grunt showed his moonies to Mr. Bellow. When Mr. Bellow's falcon drove near Grunt, he saw the painting on the moonies and was very angry. Therefore Adam's idea was successful.

I think the climax of the story is that Grunt showed Mr Bellow his monies. When his falcon drove near Grunt, he saw the painting on the moonies and he felt very angry. Therefore Adam had achieved his purpose.

I think grunting to show the moonies of Mr. Bellow is the climax of the story

都唔知你講咩？用中文講一次ｌａ

2009-06-13 22:38:53 補充：
你有冇揹錯ａｒ，moonies系patpat ？！

2009-06-13 22:46:01 補充：
我try my best la~
The climax of the story is that Grunt showed his moonies(patpat點會加'es'AR?) to Mr.Bellow.
When Mr.Bellow's falcon approached Grunt,Mr.Bellow saw the painting on Grunt's moonies and he was extremely angry,so Adam's idea succeed.