英文用字難題

Obviously “Fluency in spoken English” is grammatically WRONG in the case.

In fact, both “Fluent in spoken English” and “Proficient in spoken English” are ACCEPTABLE in grammar.

For “Fluent in spoken English”, the word “spoken” in “fluent in spoken English” is REDUNDANT as suggested by 001. So simply “Fluent in English” is a better phrase.

For “Proficient in spoken English”, it is MORE COMMONLY USED in the entry requirement in many companies in Hong Kong.

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First of all, “Fluency in spoken English” is not correct in this situation.

Proficient (adj) : very skilled: having a high degree of skill in something-常用例子 - “Proficient in a language”(ie all-rounded)

Fluent (adj) : able to speak with ease: able to speak a language effortlessly and correctly. 常用例子 “fluent in English”

By “fluent”, it is implied that you are referring to the spoken aspect of that language already. So, the word “spoken” in “fluent in spoken English” is redundant.

To answer your question, though the two sentences are not wrong, they are not idiomatic.

You can simply put in “fluent in English”