Hi, can you please improve my sentence in term of grammar?
In retirement, an income of £3000 a month will be paid to a member retiring at age 65
can u improve my sentence?
2009-06-02 12:43 pm
回答 (4)
2009-06-02 5:22 pm
✔ 最佳答案
The monthly income of 3,000 will be paid to the member when retiring at the age of 65. 圖片參考：http://l.yimg.com/f/i/tw/ugc/rte/smiley_3.gif
2009-06-02 09:22:49 補充：
希望幫到你!! ^_^
2009-06-02 7:08 pm
An income cannot be paid!!!!!!!!!
An income can only be received!!!!!!!!!!!
An amount can be paid.
A payment can be paid.
An income can only be received!!!!!!!!!!!
An amount can be paid.
A payment can be paid.
2009-06-02 4:01 pm
A monthly income of £3000 will be paid to a member at the retiring age of 65.
2009-06-02 11:23:52 補充：
A monthly income of £3000 will be paid to the member at the retiring age of 65.
The "a" should be replaced by "the" due to typing error. Sorry,
2009-06-02 11:23:52 補充：
A monthly income of £3000 will be paid to the member at the retiring age of 65.
The "a" should be replaced by "the" due to typing error. Sorry,
2009-06-02 1:22 pm
A monthly income of 3000 will be paid to the member when retiring at the age of 65.
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