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Good morning, everybody. Thank you all for coming. This is a presentation about the hottest mobile to date -- the Blueberry!

Allow me to introduce you a new concept: The Blueberry has entered what we call "a mobile revolution."

Let me start by asking you this: How would you like to have a mobile that can help you like a personal secretary?

The Blueberry can do just that. Developed by the latest technology, the Blueberry has multiple functions and features that will meet all your different needs.

Compare to all the other mobiles currently on the market, the Blueberry is more functional and superbly stylish.

In this presentation, we will cover three major parts.

First, we will discuss its many features, such as the inclusion of keyboard and Bluetooth. Then, we will explore its function and advantages - what makes the Blueberry more superior than other mobiles? Finally, we will sum up by discussing how the Blueberry can be your personal secretary.

If you have any questions, we will be available to answer them after the presentation.

If you are wondering about the price, let me assure you that despite having more functions and better features, the Blueberry will not cost substantially more than other mobiles.

In fact, you will receive a 10% discount if you order during the promotion period. After the promotion period has ended, you can still receive a 5% discount in our specialty shop.

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The Blueberry has entered what we call "a mobile revolution."
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The Blueberry has entered what we call "a mobile revolution."