中文翻譯英文 ------- very urgent

Please note that after xxx system is installed for use by xx office, all data input by xx office will be accessible by Hong Kong and other offices. Please raise any concerns you may have to the foregoing, or installation will be carried out on [date].

Please note if the xxx system install with more than xx office, followed by drainage to share all the data will come out higher than the Hong Kong office will open with the other to the data. Please reply to my view, if not I will continue to install.

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Please note if the xxx system install with more than xx office, followed by drainage to share all the data will come out higher than the Hong Kong office will open with the other to the data. Please reply to my view, if not I will continue to install.

Sentence: Please pay attention if xxx system install uses compared to xx office, afterwards 佢 into all data can share shen come out, Hong Kong with other office can open to data. Please reply my opinion, if does not have the question I to be able to continue install.

譯: Please note if XXX System is intalled for XX office's use, the data they enter will be shared and sorted out, Hong Kong and other offices can also read the data. Please reply and I will continue to install only if there is no problem.

Please note that data typed in will be shared by xx office with xx system installed. The data is accessible by all staff in Hong Kong as well as other offices. Please let me know your thoughts. I would carry on installation if you do not have any questions/concern.