想用better sentense英文

Dear Sir:

Thank you very much on taking your valuable time to help on my permanent withdrawal form, and I am delighted to receive the confirmation letter on these following days.
1)About this letter, may it emphasizes that I left Leicester University was due to financial problem.
2)Can I also please have another letter to explain that I could not obtain the year 1 exam result because I could not fulfill the entire Seminar2 exam.

*2) 我其實想表達year 1 成績表出, 當seminar1 + 2 完成先有~ seminar 1我完成, seminar2 未完成~ 所以冇成績表~

真係唔該駛你地`~