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2. Kelly has a bad week in her school. she is upset about the best
friend move away and has a bad seat. she is disappointed about
she cannot join the choir. write a reply to kelly to cheer her up.
(80 words)


Dear Kelly,


how are you? i am sorry to hear that you had a bad week in your
school. Cheer up! it is not the end of the world.
your friend, carol has changed to another school, don't be upset.
you can write letters to keep in touch with her, just as we do. she still
is your best friend.
and than, if you cannot concentrate in lessons, you will tell your
teacher to change the seat.
kelly, don't disappointed, i know you love singing and sing well. i
think if you have more practice, you will sing better. work hard for
next time to join the choir. so don't be unhappy, you must think of all
the good things in life. you know , bad things are part of life. i hope
you will feel better after a while.
I really want to join you at Easter and I look forward to see you
and your DIY paper bag. keep in touch.



Love,
Tiffany