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One year ago, an earthquake measuring 8.0 on the Richter scale occurred in Sichuan, China. This earthquake claimed many lives and many were injured, mostly students. Up to now, the living conditions of the Sichuan people haven't recovered to the same level they enjoyed in the past.
The surviours who experienced the largest earthquake are still living in hardship. They need to rely on government's relief to spend their lives every day. Many students recalled the day of the tragedy, they couldn't help crying. They claimed that they could not forget the earthquake which always caused them to have bad dreams. Both students and teachers suffered the same nightmare. Their lives in future are vague and they are still helpless. Nevertheless, they still live in great courage.
The author visited the victims living in a village near the earthquake-affected areas. It is said the supplies distributed to them from the government are very little. They are barely enough for the basic living. Nevertheless, they will hold a gathering and reunite with each other every sunday. The author attended their gathering and noticed that they were extremely happy and didn't seem like pessimistic as others.
The earthquake-stricken people are living in great courage and they don't give up easily. As we are living in good fortune, we should cherish our lives and what we own. We should not be upsetted by those small setbacks. At last, we should pay a high tribute to the earthquake victims.
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2009-05-15 23:17:56 補充:
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A year ago, have taken place in Sichuan, China a 8 earthquake, the earthquake caused very
Number of casualties, most of whom are students. Up to now, the people of Sichuan Province has not yet
Able to restore life.
Experience of survivors of the earthquake, life is still a very hard every day
Rely on government aid to live. Many students recalled the case of the day, all tolerance
Not tears. They said that, until now not been able to forget, but also often made bad
Dream. In addition to students, teachers are no exception. For future life, they are still 10
Am helpless. In spite of this, but they still live bravely.
Author of the disaster victims to visit the nearby villages, it is understood that they are
The government is very little material, can barely earn a living. Nevertheless, they
Sunday will be open meetings, to reunite with each other about. Authors to their party, the
The people here are very open, it seems that other people do not pessimistic.
Affected by the earthquake-affected people who are brave to live, and did not give up, and that
What we are living in well-being of the people, more should have to cherish now, do not
Discouraged because of small setbacks. Finally, we join the victims in the earthquake-induced
King.
A year ago, have taken place in Sichuan, China a 8 earthquake, the earthquake caused very
Number of casualties, most of whom are students. Up to now, the people of Sichuan Province has not yet
Able to restore life.
Experience of survivors of the earthquake, life is still a very hard every day
Rely on government aid to live. Many students recalled the case of the day, all tolerance
Not tears. They said that, until now not been able to forget, but also often made bad
Dream. In addition to students, teachers are no exception. For future life, they are still 10
Am helpless. In spite of this, but they still live bravely.
Author of the disaster victims to visit the nearby villages, it is understood that they are
The government is very little material, can barely earn a living. Nevertheless, they
Sunday will be open meetings, to reunite with each other about. Authors to their party, the
The people here are very open, it seems that other people do not pessimistic.
Affected by the earthquake-affected people who are brave to live, and did not give up, and that
What we are living in well-being of the people, more should have to cherish now, do not
Discouraged because of small setbacks. Finally, we join the victims in the earthquake-induced
King.
The Si-Chuan richter 8 earthquake which happened a year ago took away many lives. Most of the victims were students. The people of Si-Chuan still cannot get back to their living routine.
Survivors of the terrible earthquake are still living a very difficult life. They rely on the government daily supplement to sustain their living. Tears still roll down from many students' faces whenever they talk about what happened on that dreadful day. They said that they could not forget it and their sleeps are often haunted with nightmares. Such conditions also happen to the teachers. Their future are so obscure. Nonetheless, they still bravely continue their life-journey.
The author visited the refugees who live in the village neaer the disaster area. According to what they said, the daily supplement provided by the government is very little. It could only maintain their living reluctantly. Nevertheless, their weekly gathering on Sunday keeps going on. When the author attended the gathering, what he saw were all happy faces which were totally different from other pessimistic refugees.
Those who were affected by the earthquake haven't given up their lives. Therefore, for those lucky ones like us should learn to cherish what we have , and should never give up for tiny setback. Finally, let us once again pay tribute to all the refugees of the earthquake.
2009-05-15 16:01:10 補充:
Such conditions also happen to the teachers. Their future are so obscure.
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The author visited the refugees who live in the village neaer the disaster area.
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One year ago, the eight magnitude of earthquake happened in SichuanChina. Many people lost their life or injured , most of them were students. The residents there have not gone back to the normal life yet.
The survivors still live in poverty, depending on government's help. Many students dropped down their tears when recalling the disaster which happend that day. They said that they coule not forget it and always had nightmares. Such a case not only happened in students, but happened in teachers. They feel so helpless while facing the future. Nevertheless, they are still going on there life in courage.
The writter visited to the villagers arounding the disaster area. It is found that they got so few stuff from government that they are hard to keep on living. However, they get together every sunday. The writter joined in their party and he found that the people there are all very happy and not so pessimistic as others.
The people suffering this earthquake still live in courage, and they never give up. Compared to us who live in happiness, we must be more precious our belongings . We shouldn not be dejected when suffering a few frustration. Last but not least, let us express respect to the victims.
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one year aga,China had a earthquake, this earthquake make many people hurt and die. Many of them are student. Until now,many people in China have not resume the lives before now.
undergo this earthquake's people, their life is very hardship, theydepend government's thing to live everyday. Many student think about that day, they will weep. They said that they not forgot that day, they always dream something dreadful. the teacher alway dream something dreadful too. They are still very no use. For all that but they still bravely went on living.
Author to disaster area nearby village visitation disaster victims, it is known that their daily institute Results in the government commodity are very few, can only maintain the livelihood reluctantly.
For all this, they each Will hold on Sunday also the meeting, will reunite mutually. Has been right the author to theirs faction, sends Here people are very presently open and bright, as if does not look like other people such pessimistically.
Human who is affected this earthquake, brave going on living, has not given up, that We live in happiness person, even more should treasure has now, does not want Is discouraged because of the small setback. Finally, we send together to this earthquake's disaster victims Respect.
I hope I can help you~
2009-05-15 14:11:26 補充:
X one year aga,
correct one year ago
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