Long long ago????

Tell me the tales that to me once so dear.
Sing me the songs I delighted to hear,
Now you have come all my grief is removed.
Let me forget just as long as I could
Let me believe that you always be near.
Do you remember that path where we met
Ah, yes you told me you'll never forget
Into our love is my smile your prefer
Laugh when you spoke with a joy to each word.
Still my heart treasures the praises I heard

I have just copied the above sentences from twins song ( long long age ). Could somebody check whether the English sentences grammar is right or wrong? Thank you so much. I'd be grateful...

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有沒有人可以講給我聽...最上面的十句 Grammar 有沒有錯...

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有沒有人講出沒有人答的原因..........

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請更正所有英文化錯誤...謝謝..

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請幫忙...請幫忙...請幫忙..請幫忙..請幫忙..請幫忙..請幫忙..

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Please help me ..Please help me ...Please help me...Please help me..Please help me...

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Please save me ..Please save me..Please save me ...Please save me...Please save me..

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Could anybody help me a great favor?...Could anybody help me a great favor?...Could anybody help me a great favor?...Could anybody help a great favor? Could anybody help me a great favor?.. Could anybody help me a great favor?...

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所有 Help Me 的字句.全無復製..全無復製,. 全無復製...I just type each word..All help me sentences, it isn't copy, it isn't copy, it isn't copy, I just hard work to type each word.

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I'd be grateful..I'd be grateful..I'd be grateful.I'd be grateful..I'd be grateful..I'd be grateful.I'd be grateful..I'd be grateful..I'd be grateful..I'd be grateful..I'd be grateful..

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