幫我改一下做英文

以往的我總是帶給你種種煩擾,現在你已到逹一個靈靜的新地方,不受外界的任何騷擾,我不想打擾你那平靜的生活,但真的希望你沒有離開我,如果可以再給我一個選擇。

I know I always drew you all types of agitation in the old days.
Now that you have reached a new peaceful horizon,
and you will no more disturbed by agitation from the external world!

I know I should not disturb your peaceful life,
while at the same time I am wondering if I were given the choice once more,
I truly wish you had never left me!

'...will no more disturbed... ' if changed to '...will no more be disturbed...' is even better.

baggio's answer is very good!

I once kept bringing you different types of disturbance but you have arrived at a new place of transquility without any disturbance from outside. I don't want to disturb your transquil life. If you can give me one more chance,I do hope you will not leave me.

My old self always gave you kinds of disturbance, now you have reached a quiet new place, which is free of disturbance outside. I do not want to disturb your quiet life, but really wish that you did not leave me, if I can be offered another choice.