Check grammar please?

-If you were criticized all the time,what do you do?

You can't normally mix subjunctive with present indicative , which is the most likely interpretation of this sentence. Either "If you are criticized all the time, what do you do?" (indicative) or "If you were criticized all the time, what would you do?" (subjunctive). The sentence you have only makes sense if the first part is indicative past (You either were or weren't criticized all the time, but the speaker doesn't know, and is asking for an answer to what do you do (now), if you were criticized (then).) For example, if your parents criticized you as a child, what do you do now as a parent? It needs a context to work.


-A Zen cow(noun) um...ok, there's no grammar here

-Clean out the stupid worry of your mind(slogan) I think the grammar's ok but it sounds very weird. Maybe "Clear your mind of stupid worries"? I don't like the phrase "stupid worry" but that's probably mostly because I don't like the word "stupid".

-Focus on your breath or one thing(slogan) grammar's fine, but it's odd to choose between "your breath" and "one thing"---since your breath can be thought of as a thing. Do you mean "one object", like something in the room you can see, or "one thought"?

-Become a happy disciple(slogan) that one's fine

-Bad day is another good luck
I can't figure that one out. Every bad day also has some good luck?

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I honestly don't understand your question. There isn't any grammar problem with the statements that you have offered. What is the question?

If you intended to play with this question, I guess I'd become a good Zen Cow like the Los Angeles Lakers right now.

Rich