英文問題!麻煩幫忙執文法n睇下d字有無用錯!20點!
2009-05-03 10:00 pm
I have some dreams. I hope I can earn enough money to get by; my family doesn’t need to worry about money anymore, to have a warm family, to keep believed my only god, to live lightly. But now it just looks like untouchable dreams simply. Fortunately, I born in a average-class family, I had never thought about responsibility to others. I just hope to live happily everyday, to muddle through somehow. I have changed when I was twenty. I needed to quit because my result of all subjects were poor, father didn’t expect to study, he said that I needed to be independent and I needed to pay all the cost for my choice like time and money! At first, I confused, really confused. Then I started to think about my future and to find my way seriously, but this way is rugged.
回答 (4)
2009-05-04 9:54 am
2009-05-04 1:53 am
The problem in your writing is not only concentrated on grammar or using of vocabulary. You wrote your essay in Chinese-english style. I am a Hongkong Chinese and I know English, so that I can understand what you were writing. However, if an American or British people they cannot really understand the content very much. This can be improved if you read more English.
I have some dreams. I hope I can earn enough money to get by; my family doesn't need to worry about money anymore, to have a warm family, to keep believed my only god, to live lightly. But now it just looks like untouchable dreams. I was born in a middle class family, like other youngsters, I had never thought about responsibility. I just hope to live happily everyday, to muddle through somehow. I have changed when I was twenty. I needed to quit my life style because my examination results in all subjects were poor. My father didn't expect me to go on study and said that I needed to be independent and bore all my own costs. At first, I confused, really confused. Then I started to think about my future and to find out my way seriously, but I knew that the way is rugged.
I have some dreams. I hope I can earn enough money to get by; my family doesn't need to worry about money anymore, to have a warm family, to keep believed my only god, to live lightly. But now it just looks like untouchable dreams. I was born in a middle class family, like other youngsters, I had never thought about responsibility. I just hope to live happily everyday, to muddle through somehow. I have changed when I was twenty. I needed to quit my life style because my examination results in all subjects were poor. My father didn't expect me to go on study and said that I needed to be independent and bore all my own costs. At first, I confused, really confused. Then I started to think about my future and to find out my way seriously, but I knew that the way is rugged.
2009-05-03 10:27 pm
I have some resolutions. I hope I can earn enough money to get by which makes my family more relaxed about money anymore, have a warm family, and keep believing in my only God, in order to live lightly. But now it just looks like untouchable dreams simply (just同simply意思差唔多). Fortunately, I was born in an average-classed family, I had never thought about being responsible to others. I just hope to live happily every day, to muddle through somehow. I have changed when I was twenty. I needed to quit because my result of all subjects were poor, my father did not expect me to study, he said that I needed to be independent and pay all the cost for my choice like time and money! At first, I was confused, really confused. Then I started to think about my future and find my way seriously, but this way is rugged.
word冇用架,因為文法唔係咁死板,好似普通信仰用god,神用大楷,句子word都改唔到.
word冇用架,因為文法唔係咁死板,好似普通信仰用god,神用大楷,句子word都改唔到.
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