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In the year 2015 IT WILL BECOME A advanced I.T. year.

(BY THAT TIME,
FOR SURE THAT PEOPLE WILL INCREASE THE POPULARITY BY USING COMPUTER TO COMPLETE EVERYTHING.)
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It is very popular that people use computer to compLete any matters.

For example, Internet Shopping , Business OR CommUnication... ETC.
Although it is QUITE convenient BUT it ALSO bring THE I. T. CRIMINAL PROBLEMS TO THE PUBLIC.

Internet shop is a convenient channel, let US STAY AT home and ABLE TO BUY THE TRENDY CLOTHES ONLINE.

Actually, it is very dangerous. Because OF internet shop usually require customers to pay through credit cards.
Customers MIGHT TAKE RISK WHEN THEY ARE REQUIRED TO input passwords of credit cards ONTO A FAKE INTERNET LINKINk. IN SUCH CASE, criminals can get the passwords easily then they will pretend as the customers to GAIN WHAT THEY WANTED. It makeS innocent customers lose their money.

In addition, computers become a helpful tools for workers, workers
will deal some secret information with computers. For example,
CUSTOMER'S NAME and business transaction. Some criminals MIGHT confuse thier important informaTion and DISCLOSE THIER SECRET UNCONSCIOUSLY. It makeS THE workers get a great loss AGAIN.

Furthermore, people usually use computers to contact with their
friends and families. CRIMINALS ARE ABLE TO STEAL THE INFORMATION DURING THIER CONVERSATION. NO MATTER THEY ARE IMPORTANT OR NOT. Simply like thier personal
PHONE numbers and addresseson THEN they ARE AVAILABLE TO pretend as victim'S family and request victims to pay
money to thier bank account.

SUCH cases might HAPPEN very often in 2015, because of people RELIED ON computers TOO excessively and they unAware of personal information protection. As a police officer, I suggest people WHO should install some USEFUL protective equipments and should not input TOO MUCH important information onto YOUR computers, IN ORDER TO MINIMIZE THE OPPORTUNITY OF YOUR information TO BE stolen.

2009-05-02 06:05:26 補充：
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2009-05-02 06:08:44 補充：
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In the year 2015, it is a advanced IT year. It is very popular
that people use computer to compete any matters. For example,
internet shopping , business , and “comminication”.
Although it is so convenient, it bring some IT crimes
committed by citizens.
應該係: communication

Internet shop is a convenient channel, let's people sit in home and
afford clothes from it, but it is very dangerous, because internet
shop usually require customers to pay through credit cards.Customers
will input their passwords of credit cards into the computers.
Criminals can get the passwords easily. Then, they will pretend as
the customers to afford something. It m“make” innocent customers lose
their money.
應該係: makes

In addition, computers become “a helpful ”tools for “workers, workers” will deal some secret information with computers. For example,customers' names and business transactions. Some criminals will
confuse that important “informaion” and publish it. It “make” workers get a great loss.
應該係: help
workers ; workers
information
makes

Furthermore, people usually use computers to contact with their
friends and families. “Somethime” they will input some secret
information during communication. For example, “personal
phones' numbers and addresses”. Criminals get this information,
they will pretend as victims' family and request victims to pay
money to criminals' bank accounts.
應該係: Sometime
personals' phone numbers and personals' sddress

That cases often happened in 2015, because people depend
computers excessively and they are “unware” of personal information protection. As a police officer, I suggest that people should
install some protective “equipments” and should not input some
important information into their “computers, it” can diminish
the choice of information stolen.
應該係: unwire
equipment
computers; it

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personals' phone numbers and personals' “”address