english grammer ok?

2009-04-28 2:03 am
"Land slips were found at the village and firemen had been informed to take follow. " pls help...thx!
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& why?

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2009-05-01 9:00 pm
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It should be:

There was landslide(not landslips) at the village and firemen were informed(you should use past tense) to take charge of the rescue work.

I think you have good use of vocabulary like "inform", and also show good understanding of passive voice. However, we seldom say landslide is found. Because everyone in the city would know that when such hazards happened.

Good try=) Read more or ask your teachers could help you to improve. Continue to try your best!
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2009-04-29 10:38 am
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2009-04-28 5:02 am
你好,我会写。。。

Landslips / landslides were found at the village and firemen had been informed / noticed to handle / take charge of them.

希望能帮到你咯。。。: )
2009-04-28 4:27 am
Land slips were discovered or reported at the village and firemen were called to take the rescue operations at the affected area.
(奉召到災區拯救)


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