20點急求助翻譯! 必須用FORMAL ENGLISH~

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2009-04-27 7:29 pm

月費: 每月HK$3,000元 (如一次過繳付則為年費二萬元)

會員優惠:

1.會員可享用本會尊尚優越的禮遇
2.優先快捷的訂房服務,且享免房費優惠
3.在會所內所有酒水及食品均享八折優惠
4.會費將全部以簽賬形式於會所內消費
5.免費尊享兩次"佳人美酒"燭光晚餐
6.自動入選成超級公關員(Super PR Girl)的評審會委員
7.會所於每個月舉行一次大型主題舞會,會員將獲邀成為特別嘉賓
8.贈送價值二萬元之雪茄或名酒
9.享用會員尊屬私家咪一支(連儲物櫃)
10.贈送私人"名廠紅酒杯"一套,並可刻上會員名字,讓會員與嘉賓於會所享用美酒時更顯高尚氣派
11.如需代為儲存紅酒或自攜酒水,將免除開瓶費
12.享用免費泊車服務

回答 (1)

Siu Ming

2009-04-28 3:29 am

✔ 最佳答案

My suggestion:
Monthly Fee: HK$3,000 per month (Special prepaid rate: HK$20,000 per year)
Membership Privileges:
1/ Use of facilities and premium services provided by the Club
2/ Priority room booking service and free room benefit
3/ 20% discount on food and beverage spending in the Club
4/ All Club fee paid can be used as credit for spending in the Club
5/ Two free “Beauty & Fine Wine” candlelight dinners in the Club
6/ Automatically enrolled to be a member of the Judging Panel for the “Super PR Girl” Contest
7/ Invited to be the VIP of the Grand Ball held in the Club every month
8/ Complimentary cigars or fine wine worth HK$20,000
9/ Use of a personal microphone supplied by the Club (with locker provided)
10/ A complimentary set of fine wine glass. Member’s name can be engraved on the glasses, showing the privileged status of the member when enjoying the fine wine with his guests
11/ Free wine storage service and no corkage charge
12/ Free valet parking service
Note: The meaning of Point 4 in Chinese is not very clear. I hope this is what it means in English.

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