You friend has been addicted to play online games recently.Write an e-mail to advisee him.what he should do.
Dear Editor,
I am very worry about your life because you are addicted to playing online game recently. Many people like using the Internet , you and I also include the Internet .You are my friend ,I want to express my mind.
I hope that you want to know playing the game is not only you life .You have many friend. and play other else in the outside do not alway stat at home .You alway playing the game and do not sleeping .I feel this is very affect health of the body .
Also ,I hope you will listen my suggestion.May be,you can set the time to playing the online game. The Internet is very useal . You can find different information .It is not only play .
You can consider my opinion. ,and I hope you will improve to addicted.I want you are very clever to know my mind.
You sincerely,
Amanda
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2009-04-27 4:25 am
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2009-04-27 6:32 am
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Dear Editor,
I worry so much about your life because you have addicted in playing online game recently. Many people like using the Internet , including you and me. You are my friend so I want to express my concern.
I hope that you want to know playing the game is not only you life .You have many friend. and play other else in the outside do not alway stat at home .You alway playing the game and do not sleeping .I feel this is very affect health of the body .
I hope that you know playing online games is not the only thing you can do at home. You can do something else, like watching TV, chatting with your families or doing some exercises instead. If you do not sleep and play online games overnight, it will affect your health and your body will become weaker gradually.
Also ,I hope you will listen to my suggestion. Maybe, you can set the time for playing the online game.
The Internet is very useal . You can find different information .It is not only play . We can learn and get different information from the internet besides playing games.
Please consider my opinion and get rid of the addiction of playing online games with your clever mind. I hope that you will have a healthy life soon.
You sincerely,
Amanda
2009-04-27 4:18 pm
2009-04-27 7:20 am
1. Your friend has been addicted to playing online games recently
2. I am worried about you life.
3. You and I also use internet.
4. I want to express my opinions.
5. is not the only thing in your life.
6. You have many friends and can play with your friends outside.
7. You always don't need to stay at home.
8. You always play the games without enough sleep.
9. I feel this will affect your health.
10. listen to my suggestions.
11. Maybe.
12. Internet is a useful tool.
13. It is not only for playing but also searching information.
14. you will improve your internet addiction.
15. I hope you will be clever to accept my suggestions.
2009-04-26 23:22:34 補充：
addicted 跟 preposition to, 而不是跟 in.
2. I am worried about you life.
3. You and I also use internet.
4. I want to express my opinions.
5. is not the only thing in your life.
6. You have many friends and can play with your friends outside.
7. You always don't need to stay at home.
8. You always play the games without enough sleep.
9. I feel this will affect your health.
10. listen to my suggestions.
11. Maybe.
12. Internet is a useful tool.
13. It is not only for playing but also searching information.
14. you will improve your internet addiction.
15. I hope you will be clever to accept my suggestions.
2009-04-26 23:22:34 補充：
addicted 跟 preposition to, 而不是跟 in.
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