這句英文，請英文高手幫忙修改好嗎？ 謝謝

Therefore, I have been deeply impressed by Helen Keller, Anne Sullivan, and this very important old nurse.



PS: I don't think you need to say "I think" because people already know that it is supposed to be your opinion in your own essay...

PSS: watch out for the tense.. You didn't post the whole article, so I don't know what tense is right.

2009-04-26 09:46:17 補充：
or...

Therefore, I have been deeply impressed by not only Helen Keller and Anne Sulliwan but also this very important old nurse.



PS: you don't have to use "not only / but also" if it's not a strict Chinese-English direct translation

謝謝您的支持。我覺得Ricky回答得不錯!

Therefore, not only Helen Keller and Ann Sullivan make me impressed but one more a very important old nurse.

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