這句英文，請英文高手幫忙修改好嗎？謝謝

2009-04-26 3:24 pm

這句英文，請英文高手幫忙修改好嗎？謝謝

因此，我想讓我印象深刻的，不只是海倫凱勒和蘇利文，還有這一位非常重要的老護士。

Therefore, I think I have deeply impressed not only on Helen Keller and Anne Sullivan, but also this very important old nurse.

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2009-04-26 3:39 pm

✔ 最佳答案

Therefore, I have been deeply impressed by Helen Keller, Anne Sullivan, and this very important old nurse.

PS: I don't think you need to say "I think" because people already know that it is supposed to be your opinion in your own essay...

PSS: watch out for the tense.. You didn't post the whole article, so I don't know what tense is right.

2009-04-26 09:46:17 補充：
or...

Therefore, I have been deeply impressed by not only Helen Keller and Anne Sulliwan but also this very important old nurse.

PS: you don't have to use "not only / but also" if it's not a strict Chinese-English direct translation

參考: me

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