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今日，我到了日本的北海道，首先，我到了薰衣草園看薰衣草，之後我還去了浸溫泉，那裡的地方十分清靜。之後，我還吃了北海道的特產，海產十分新鮮和美味。這裡的景色令我大開眼界，我還到了神社參拜，十分幽靜。北海道，希望有機會再去多一次！
英文翻譯:
Today, I went to Hokkaido in Japan, first of all, I went to see the lavender garden lavender, and then I also went to the Baptist Hot Springs, where a very quiet place. , I also eat a Hokkaido specialty, seafood is very fresh and delicious. The scenery here eye-opener for me, I also went to the shrine is very quiet. Hokkaido, would welcome the opportunity to go again!

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I went to Hokkaido in Japan today. First of all, we went to the lavender garden to see the lavenders. Hence we went to soak at the geyser which is a very quiet place. Afterwards, we ate the specialties of Hokkaido which were very fresh and luscious. These sceneries had expanded my horizon, we also went to the temple to worship. I really hope that I can visit Hokkaido once again.

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Today, I went to Japan's Hokkaido.
First, I looked at the aspic and I went to the aspic garden.
Next, I have also soaked the hot spring, there was very quiet.
After that, I also ate Hokkaido's special product, the marine product have been very fresh and the delicacy.
Here scenery makes me to broaden the outlook, I also arrived at the shrine to pay respect, there was very lonesome and quiet.
Hokkaido, I hoped that has the opportunity to go to one times again.



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2009-04-23 18:04:43 補充：
上面嘅係錯的!!!! 應該是 :

把Next 改為 After that

把After that改為Finally

回答:

Today, I to Japan's Hokkaido, first, looked at the aspic I to the aspic garden, afterward I have also soaked the hot spring, there place is very quiet. Afterward, I also ate Hokkaido's special product, the marine product have been very fresh and the delicacy. Here scenery makes me to broaden the outlook, I also arrived at the shrine to pay respect, was very lonesome and quiet. Hokkaido, hoped that has the opportunity to go to many one times again!

回答:

Today, I to Japan's Hokkaido, first, looked at the aspic I to the aspic garden, afterward I have also soaked the hot spring, there place is very quiet. Afterward, I also ate Hokkaido's special product, the marine product have been very fresh and the delicacy. Here scenery makes me to broaden the outlook, I also arrived at the shrine to pay respect, was very lonesome and quiet. Hokkaido, hoped that has the opportunity to go to many one times again!