Rewrite This Paragragh

2009-04-23 12:19 am
Okay I'll keep this simple. I'm asking for people to re-write this paragraph so as to make it looks better. Here are the paragraphs.

In this world of lore good and evil couldn't be able to standtogether in peace. People, even citizens will be murdered brutallywithout formal reasons, just that if any people are standing againstthe other side will be vanquished, thoroughly.

Peoplewho are born with exceptional skills, will be sent to the Lord ofTemple (name) to become the masters of stealth and the deadly arts.These people are known as "Ninja". Among them, female ninjas are called"Kunoichi".

There was this girl, who was graced assassin..."

Apparently the italic words are the paragraphs. I want you to make it look better, make it looks more of a professional writing. Thank you very much =D



回答 (2)

2009-04-23 12:42 am
✔ 最佳答案
In this world of lore good and evil cannot co-exist peacefully. People can be brutally murdered without apparent reasons – they will be vanquished / destroyed thoroughly simply for standing for the opposite side.
People born with exceptional skills will be sent to the Temple of the Lord to become masters of stealth and other deadly arts. They are known as “Ninjas”, with female ones being called "Kunoichi".
There was once this girl who was a gifted assassin…
參考: Veni - Vidi - Vici
2009-04-23 7:50 am
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