可唔可以幫幫忙睇下可以點改?thanks
1)Before I applied any accounting job, I search for much information about the duty of an accounts clerk through employment advertisement. I know that the main routine operation is handling AR/AP, bank reconciliation and cheque issue or deposit.
2)Although my past working experience is irrelevant to accounting even I don’t have any experience of being an accounts clerk. I am willing to learn and work hard to ensure the success of this field.
3)Also, I have strongly enthusiasm for developing my future career in accounting field. So that, I applied the accounts clerk position in your company. In the future, I expect the gain more hands-on working experience and learn more about the operation of accounting here. In my past job, I proved myself to be a hardworking, fast learning and initiative staff, therefore, I have confidence I can serve this company.
4)I know that the salary and welfare is not important for my current position, I would like to get an opportunity to build up my career in accounting field.
5)I feel very happy talking to you, thank you for giving an interview opportunity to me.
見工英文自我介紹!請幫幫忙,謝謝
2009-04-20 7:01 am
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2009-04-20 11:12 pm
✔ 最佳答案
1) Before I applied for any accounting jobs, I did research on the duties of an accounts clerk through the recruiting advertisements and I understand that the main responsibility is handing AR/AP, bank reconsiliation and issuing or depositing cheques.2) Even though my past working experiences are unrelated to the accounting field nor have I ever worked as an accounts clerk before, I am still working to learn and work hard for success in this field.
3) I am very enthusiastic about building a career in the accounting field and that is why I applied for the accounts cleark position at your company. In the future, I hope to gain more hands-on experience and learn more about the operations of accounting. In my previous job, I have proven myself to be a hardworking, fast learning, initiative staff and I am very confident that I can bring the same to your company.
4) The salary as well as benefits are not important for the position because I am really looking for opportunities to build up my career in the accounting field.
5)I feel very happy talking to you, thank you for giving an interview opportunity to me.
5) Thank you so much, I am very happy to be given this opportunity to meet with you.
2009-04-20 15:14:02 補充：
Hope I helped, I know how difficult it is to get a job in today's economy. Wish you the best of luck!
參考: Arizona State University business student
2009-04-20 8:25 pm
有一些意見, 希望使英文自然一點
1)Before I applied for any accounting job, I tried to look for information about the duties of an accounts clerk from the recruitment advertisements. I learned that they are mainly related to handling AR/AP, bank reconciliation, and issue and deposit of cheques.
2)My past working experience is not related to accounting. I don’t have any experience as an accounts clerk, either. But I am willing to learn and work hard in the hope of succeeding this field.
3)Also, I have strong enthusiasm in developing my future career in the accounting field. This is why I applied for the accounts clerk position of your company. In the future, I expect to gain more hands-on working experience and learn more about accounting here. In my past job, I have proved myself to be a hardworking, fast learning person and a staff member with a proactive attitute. therefore, I have confidence I can contribute to this company.
4)I know that the salary and welfare is not important for my current position, I would like to get an opportunity to build up my career in accounting field. (這句不知道你想表達甚麼所以不知道怎樣改. Do you mean: I place the opportunity to build up a career in the accounting field above the salaries and welfare I would receive for the job. )
5) I am happy to talk to you. Thank you for giving me the chance of interview.
TRY.
1)Before I applied for any accounting job, I tried to look for information about the duties of an accounts clerk from the recruitment advertisements. I learned that they are mainly related to handling AR/AP, bank reconciliation, and issue and deposit of cheques.
2)My past working experience is not related to accounting. I don’t have any experience as an accounts clerk, either. But I am willing to learn and work hard in the hope of succeeding this field.
3)Also, I have strong enthusiasm in developing my future career in the accounting field. This is why I applied for the accounts clerk position of your company. In the future, I expect to gain more hands-on working experience and learn more about accounting here. In my past job, I have proved myself to be a hardworking, fast learning person and a staff member with a proactive attitute. therefore, I have confidence I can contribute to this company.
4)I know that the salary and welfare is not important for my current position, I would like to get an opportunity to build up my career in accounting field. (這句不知道你想表達甚麼所以不知道怎樣改. Do you mean: I place the opportunity to build up a career in the accounting field above the salaries and welfare I would receive for the job. )
5) I am happy to talk to you. Thank you for giving me the chance of interview.
TRY.
2009-04-20 4:51 pm
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