一篇我的英文日記,希望大家能指出我的文法錯誤和多餘的詞彙!!

2009-04-19 1:23 pm
She has a habit writing diaries while I have a habit reading hers. When she was living
abroad, I knew she very missed her family from her diaries. I thought she had
homesickness and it’s general for overseas students. It‘s difficult for the young to change their living environment. A lot of overseas students are below eighteen years old, they still need care by their family. However, when they live abroad, they have to care themselves. Some students may give up their study for this because it’s not that all students can
accept this change.

Then, she said some interesting things about her part-time job. She said studying abroad
is very costly and she once worried if her family can afford so she had a job for
decreasing some fees her family paid. This fee is not that all family can accept afford so
it’s not that all student have a chance to study abroad.

She feels lucky for getting this chance and she also study hard for valuing it. So, if you
also have a chance to study abroad, you have to value it because the cost is not low.

回答 (3)

2009-04-19 3:46 pm
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I like to read the diaries she keeps, and one is about living abroad that she missed her family very much. She also said studying abroad cost a lot and she once worried about whether her family could afford so she worked for easing her family’s tuitional burden. Then she said some interesting things about her part-time job, and felt lucky to get this chance that she would value it by studying hard.

Nostalgia’s general for overseas students. Many of them are below eighteen, who still need their families’ care, since the young usually find hard to cope with their living environment. Moreover, they have to take care of themselves when living abroad, if they cannot accept this change, a few of them may give up their study. However, not all families can afford the fee and therefore not all students have a chance to study abroad, if I have a chance to study abroad, I will definitely value it because the cost is vast.


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2009-04-21 10:45 am
She has a habit of writing diaries, and I have a habit of reading hers. When she was living
abroad, I knew she missed her family very much from her diaries. I thought she had
nostalgia which is not surprising for overseas students. It is difficult for the youth to change their living environment. A lot of overseas students are under eighteen years old who still need the care from their families. However, when they live abroad, they have to care about themselves. Some students may give up their studies because they cannot accept this change.

She also mentioned some interesting things about her part-time job. She said studying abroad
is very costly. She once worried if her family can afford her expenses, so she got a job to relieve the financial burden of her family. The tuition is not something that all families can afford, so
not everybody has a chance to study abroad.

She feels lucky for getting this chance and thus study hard for valuing it. So, if you
also have a chance to study abroad, you have to value it because it is very costly.


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