ketchup...

It's ketchup which can stimulate my appetite. I remember I went to "McDonald" to eat French fries with ketchup for the first time, I took one of them to add ketchup. I was so excited that I could eat two bags of French fries. That was the time I got a sore throat and husky voice afterwards. It’s too bad if I were a singer.

Let's return to the subject of ketchup. It is in a bottle, and the height is 12 inches. The capacity is 360 ounces which is made in America . According to statistics, America has the most famous of cultivated organic tomatoes. As for the ketchup ingredients of the ketchup, water, sauce, sugar, onion, garlic and preservate23 are added to it. Do you know what can be cooked by using ketchup? It can be used to cook the fried rice, borsh, sweet and sour ribs, sweet and sour pork, etc...
You better store the ketchup in a cool and dry place, and keep away from direct sunlight . You should put in the refrigerator after opening. Its expiration date is Dec 6th, 2114.

It's ketchup that stimulates my appetite. I remember the first time I went to "Mcdonalds" to eat french fries with ketchup, I took one french fry accompanied with ketchup since that was an interseting action. I could eat two big servings of french fries. I had a sore throat and husky voice later, luckily, I am not a singer.
Let's return to the ketchup, a bottle package, with the height of 12 inches, 360-ounce capacity was made in America.Incidentally, America is most famous for cultivating organic tomatoes. Ketchup’s ingredients include tomatoes, water, soy sauce, sugar, onions, garlics and preservation 23. Do you know the recipe about ketchup? For example, fried rice, borsh, roast pork chop, sweet and sour pork etc...
You better store it in cool and dry places, and keep it away from direct sunlight . You should keep it frozen after opened, The expiry date is is 6 Dec 2114 years.

It's ketchup, it really stimulates my appetite (for food - redundant). I remember on my first visit to "Mc(D)onald's" which I ordered french fries with ketchup for the first time, was a singer, too bad.

2009-04-20 20:42:41 補充：
I ate the fries one by one to enjoy every moment of it and the "dipping" (action) into ketchup is just simply"(beyond words)". In those good old days, I could eat two portions of (french-redundant here) fries.

2009-04-20 20:42:53 補充：
However on that occasion, I think it was overdone slightly, I had (a) sore throat and husky voice later.

2009-04-20 20:45:44 補充：
Let's return to my favourite ketchup, well it comes in a bottle (packing) around 12 inches in height and weighs 360 ounce per bottle. Manufactured in America. Apparently, America is ( ) famous for (cultivating? growing?) organic tomatoes.

2009-04-20 20:47:40 補充：
Ketchup is best stored in cool temperature and dry place, (kept) away from direct sunlight . It should be kept refrigerated after opening.

2009-04-20 23:05:01 補充：
Ketchup is best stored in cool temperature and dry place, (kept) away from direct sunlight . It should be kept refrigerated after opening.


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It's ketchup, it really stimulates my appetite for food. I remember on my first visit to "Mcdonald's" which I ordered french fries with ketchup for the first time, I ate the fries one by one to enjoy every moment of it and the "dipping" motion into ketchup is just simply"undescribable". In those good old days, I could eat two portions of french fries. However on that occasion, I think it was overdone slightly, I had sore throat and husky voice later. If I was a singer, too bad.

Let's return to my favourite ketchup, well it comes in a bottle package around 12 inches in height and weighs 360 ounce per bottle. Manufactured in America. Apparently, America is the most famous for cultivated organic tomatoes. As for ketchup ingredient, it consists of, tomato, water, sauce, suger, onion, garlic and preservatives.
Do you know which foods goes well with ketchup? fried rice, borsh, sweet and sour ribs, sweet and sour pork etc...

Ketchup is best stored in cool temperature and dry place, keep away from direct sunlight . It should be kept refrigerated after opening. For this particular bottle, the best before date is 6 December 2114

Review the essay, I've corrected the grammar for you.

2009-04-20 21:21:48 補充：
stet > keep

Keep away correct

2009-04-20 21:22:44 補充：
ie stay away from sth
not stayed away