英文文法對唔對

He came back quickly.
He found his father who was killed by a man.

There is no grammatical mistake if they're individual sentences.
However, we usually cancel "by somebody" after killed if the character don't know who is the killer, or even he knows.

If those are sentences of the same story. You should change the grammer.


Let the scene is their home.


If u want to say "He came back. He found his father who had been killed", that's alright.

Otherwise, u'd write it like


"He came back immediately as he heard (that) his father had been killed"


As he realised this after his father died. Also, it's a very serious situation, u'd use immediately rather than quickly. Or,


"He hardly heard his father had been killed when he came back."


Finally, if the father was killed in an other place, u can say


"He hurry to ( /went to) the train station immediately, after hearing his father had been killed there."

2009-04-08 15:43:13 補充：
Sorry!
This sentence is wrong.


"He hardly heard his father had been killed when he came back."

2009-04-08 15:44:59 補充：
"He hurried to ( /went to) the train station immediately, after hearing his father had been killed there."

2009-04-08 15:46:55 補充：
The above sentence is the correction of


"He hurried to ( /went to) the train station immediately, after hearing his father had been killed there."

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1.He came back quickly.
(文法接受)
2.He found his father who was killed by a man.
較好的答案: He found that his father was killed by a man.

第1句著重點係came個度，要睇番你全包係咪用緊past teens

第2句唔知你想表達d咩

係著重要表達出who was killed by a man呢個

定係佢呀爸比人殺左

其中一個正確答案︰He found that his father was killed by a man yesterday.

He came back quickly. --- No grammar mistake
He found (that his father) was killed by a man.