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Good morning everyone, today I would like to share a film with you . It is high school musical 3.
The characters of this film are Troy , Gabriella, Sharpay, Ryan, Chad and Taylor.
They need to say goodbye to each other this time because they need to go to the university and continue their study . Everyone nervous about it. The character Troy, who plays basketball VERY well, is the member of a basketball team wildcat. He is full of troubles. He hesitates that should he goes with his best friend Chad to a same university or gives up basketball then chose other choices. Besides, he needs to separate with his girlfriend Gabriella and worries that how to maintain their relationship after they won’t be the same university. In addition, parents’ anticipation increase pressure and cause some conflicts between them.

I think that the plot of every sence is impression. There is not only some hearing enjoyment in this film. For example,there are mamy dance in this film. Besides, there are many lovely songs, that make this film just like a show and it is a successful show.

I really enjoyed the film. It reminded me back to Primary 6.When we are primary 6, we also need to have an important decision in our life that is choosing a secondary school. It related to our future to decide good or bad. I also had the same troubles that Troy mentioned. At that time, my friends and I wanted to choose the same secondary school as we didn't want to separate to eachone. In addition, my parents always advised me some choices just they wanted. I won’t forget that because that is the first turning point in my life. I think the film is so meaningful since it implied that when we make decision, we should not restrict on anyway including our friends and parents.
Actually, we meet everyone by chance but bid farewell is a must. However, farewell at this time is for the encounter of next time. We should smile to meet each other and smile to farewell.

I think that the plot keeps me at the edge of my seat, every scene leaves a deep impression in my heart. The movie has the audio-visual enjoyment, for
example the film had many dances and easy listening songs. This makes the movie a very successful show.

I really enjoyed the film. After I watched the film, it reminded me back to Primary 6. When we were in primary 6, we also need to have an important decision in our life that is choosing a secondary school relevant to our future. I also had the same troubles that Troy mentioned. At that time, my friends and I wanted to choose the same secondary school because we did not want to separate from each other. My parents always advised me for what they want. I would not forget that time because that was the first turning point in my life. I think the film is so meaningful because it implied that when we make decision we should not be influenced by our friends and relatives.

Actually, encounter is a coincidence and separation is unavoidable. But this separation is for the next encounter, so why do we miss this separation that much?


We should smile no matter it is an encounter or a separation.

2009-04-09 04:17:37 補充：
Beginning
Good morning everyone, today I would like to share a film with you which is “high school musical 3.”
The characters of the film are Troy , Gabriella, Sharpay, Ryan, Chad and Taylor.

2009-04-09 04:18:40 補充：
This time they need to say goodbye to each other because they need to go to university and further their studies. Everyone is nervous about it. The character Troy who plays basketball very well, and he was the member of a basketball team wildcat.

2009-04-09 04:19:25 補充：
He was full of troubles. He hesitated whether he should go with Chad to the same Univeristy or make other choices.

2009-04-09 04:19:32 補充：
Besides, he needed to part with his girlfriend Gabriella and worried that how to maintain their relationship after the separation. In addition, parents’ anticipation increased pressure and caused some conflicts between them.

2009-04-09 04:20:16 補充：
Please read my supplemental sections before reading the essay. Sorry for the confusion of the order.

Good morning everyone, today I would like to share a film to you that is high school musical 3.
The characters of the film are Troy , Gabriella, Sharpay, Ryan, Chad and Taylor.
This time they need to say goodbye to each other that’s because they need to go to university and continues their study themselves. Everyone nervous about it. The character Troy who play basketball VERY well and was the member of a basketball team wildcat. He was full of troubles. He hesitated that should he go with his best friend Chad to a same university or gave up basketball then chose other choices. Besides, he needed to separate with his girlfriend Gabriella and worried that how to maintain their relationship after they won’t be the same university. In addition, parents’ anticipation increased pressure and caused some conflicts between them.

我認為劇情十分緊湊,每一幕令我印象深刻.電影中不但有視聽上的享受. For example the film had many dance 而且還有一首首adj的歌曲,令電影just like a show and it is a 十分成功的show.

I really enjoyed the film. After I watching the film, it reminded me back to Primary 6.When we are primary 6, we also need to have a important decision in our life that is choosing a secondary school it related to our future to decide good or bad. I also had the same troubles that Troy mentioned. In that time, I and my friends wanted to choose the same secondary school that’s because we weren’t want to separate to eachone. Also my parents always advised some choices to me just they want. I won’t forget that time because that is the first turning point in my life. I think the film so meaningful that’s because the film implied that when we make decision we should not restrict on any way including our friends and parents.
Actually, 相遇是偶然,離別是必然 但這次的離別, 是為了下一次的相遇. 為什麼我們要那麼不捨呢????????