一篇我的英文日記,希望大家能指出我的文法錯誤和多餘的詞彙!!

This is an urgent case for me. Easter's holidays will start soon (in English we normally do not use XXX will nearly start). This will be (using “will be” instead of “is” to stress your anxiety) the last holidays for me to prepare my final exam. I only spent about half a month for the last exam and the result made me very disappointed. I have to at least solve two major problems on my study. Otherwise, the next result will make me (no “so”) sad again.

The first one is about my listening skill in English. I found that I don’t (since you still do not have progress, we should use present tense here) have any progress on this (no “way”) for the past five years. When I'm doing some listening exercises I really don't know what they say. Till now I still can't find a solution for this problem. I only hope to improve this weak point by
(no “usually”) listening to a lot of English radio programs and doing a lot of dictations.

Another problem is about my memory. I usually think it will be so great if my brain has huge memory like a computer. (Please delete this sentence: Nowadays, it will be so easy when you need to save some information on your computer.) However, it's very difficult for me to learn some new words and remember their spelling. I hope I can solve this quickly because I cannot use any dictionary during any exam.

If you have any solution (no “s” for solution because you are saying “any”. With the word “any” we should not use plural because there may not be even one solution) on these problems, I hope you can give me some suggestions. Thank you very much.

不好意思,對於回答的這位朋友,我希望能提出一些修正:

- Easter's holidays (should be Easter Holiday) will start soon
- This will be the last holidays (should be “holiday”
- for me to prepare (prepare for) my final exam.
- the result made me very disappointed (this is very Chinglish. You can say that “the result was very disappointing”).
- I have to at least (“to at least” is a very common mistake among Chinese-speaking people. You say, in English, “I have to solve at least two major problems”)
- Otherwise, the next result will make me (no “so”) sad again (Again, this is Chinglish, you can say “The result next time will just be disappointing again”).
- my listening skill in English (English listening skills).
- I found that I don’t have any progress on this for the past five years (Since you’ve specified a time here (for 5 years), you should say “I found that I haven’t had any progress for the past 5 years”).
- When I'm doing some ("some" is unnecessary. ) listening exercises
- I really don't know what they say. ("what they are saying". But this is very poor English. Properly, you can say “When I am doing listening exercises, I often don’t understand them well / I often find it difficult to understand them”)
.....待續

2009-04-06 12:16:50 補充：
- I only ("only" is unnecessary) hope to improve
- this weak point (weakness) by
- listening to a lot of (more) English radio programs and doing a lot of (more) dictations.
- I usually (should be "often") think

2009-04-06 12:17:01 補充：
- it will be so (so needs to be followed by …that. This is therefore unnecessary here) great
- if my brain has huge memory (“has better memory”
- However, it's very difficult for me to learn some new words (This is very Chinglish. You can say, “it is difficult for me to learn new vocabulary”) .

2009-04-06 12:17:13 補充：
- I cannot use any dictionary during any exam (This is very Chinglish. You can say "I cannot bring a dictionary to an exam")

2009-04-06 12:17:17 補充：
- If you have any solution (no “s” for solution because you are saying “any”. With the word “any” we should not use plural because there may not be even one solution This is not true, e.g., you will ask other people “Any questions?”  However, a better way is to say “If you have any advice”)

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