learn English gateway??

很難得你對英文有熱誠, 其實學英文不需要貴, 圖書館有很好很好的材料!


[第一句 ] About Wall Street was so expensive.

你是想說, 關於wall street, 很貴吧! 「About」 在這裡是多餘的,

說中文時,

你不會說 「關於法國餐，很貴啊！」
你會直接說 「法國餐很貴啊！」

不要用「was」, was 是過去式, Wall Street貴是事實, 我們用現在式 「is」。

不是 Wall Street 這個機構很貴, 而是 Wall Street 的課程很貴, 所以整句是

The courses in Wall Street Institute are so expensive.



[第二句] I liked to learned English very much. But I didnt had much money to spend in English..


「like」不用過去成, 你現在還是喜歡英文的, to 後面的動詞不變 , 「learned」轉「learn」

即, I like to learn English very much.

在 But I didnt had much money to spend in English一句,
不要濫用過去式! 你在交待你的近況, 用現在式「didnt」轉 「dont」, 「dont」後跟「have」.

but 前面不會是fullstop 「.」 ， 刪除「.」

Spend 後跟 on ,

你說 「我愛學英文, 但我沒錢花在英文上」 , 很長氣, 不用常常提著「英文」, 用代名詞 *it*代替第二句的 English.


整句變成 : I like to learn English very much but I dont have much money to spend on it.



[第三] Are you look my file.. I was just took bicycle food delivery..I was already thirty-something

Are you look my file 錯啊, 你叫人看你的file,
會說「看看我的file」, 英文是「look at my file」, 記住, look後面跟at!


「I was just took bicycle food delivery」又亂用過去式了, 你現在是送外賣 用 I am , 不是 I was, 而且, 不用說明送外賣是踏單車吧, 人人都知! 你說「我只是送外賣的 」就可以了,
「I am only a delivery guy」.


I was already thirty-something 轉做 I am already thirty-something
你現在是三十多歲, 不是過去。


[第四]
I had got great wrong ago. I really retouched English on two month ago in erb;

我之前犯錯英文是「 I have made a big mistake before」,
retouch不是解再接觸, 而是解作補色, 修正, 所以你可以簡單地說
你再學英文了 ----「 I started learning English again two months ago in ERB.」


[第五] 在這殺那很想學好英文, My education was just F3 twenty years ago. I think I now learned English only in培訓局, 公聯會, 字典機; Yahoo knowledge;


不用交代 *這殺那*, 你現在說你想學好英文, 當然你是在*這殺那* 想學喇!!

My education(我的教育)? 什麼東東?

不如說你中三輟學吧.


I want to master(掌握) English. I dopped out of school (輟學) when I was in Secondary three twenty years ago.

I am learning English from ERB, ftu, my electronic dictionary and yahoo knowledge right now.


[第六] thank everybody worried my English

不是關心你的英文, 是關心你吧, 說謝謝大家幫忙就ok!

「Thanks for your help!」



抱歉,沒空打整段, 我會再補充.

有問題可以e-mail我啊!
加油!

2009-04-04 14:06:17 補充：
改正過後的整段會是:

The courses in Wall Street Insitute are so expensive.
I like to learn English very much but I dont have much money to spend on it. Look at my file! I am only a delivery guy. I am already thirty something.

(續)

2009-04-04 14:06:56 補充：
I have made a big mistake before. I dopped out of school when
I was in Secondary three twenty years ago. I started learning English
again two months ago in ERB. I want to master English. (續)

2009-04-04 14:07:11 補充：
Right now, I am learning English from ERB, ftu, my electronic dictionary and yahoo knowledge. Thanks for your help!

(完, 再見了)

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http://www.hkenglishstudy.info

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