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2009-04-03 2:59 pm
-Children are really concentrate
on toys from the very beginning which let parent
to think about the good benefits and important factor of toy.

-Although the world full of attack,it still insists on dream.
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2009-04-03 3:17 pm
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Children really enjoy playing with toys right from the beginning of their lives and that leads parents to think about the good benefits and importance of toy factories.

Although the world is full of crime, people never give up on their dreams.


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