Check grammar please?

2009-04-03 2:56 pm
-RUIT provided a variety type of organic
food,will enter the lady market
which care about their healthy body,but
also looking for tasty food in the same time.

-The whole logo was made by leaf that represent
nature industry,also really match the brand style,
new,fresh and simple,then a green cross on top means
healthy cure.

-all that package design direction were slim ,clean and colorful
which looked like no impurities but health,pure and pretty.

回答 (1)

2009-04-04 11:14 pm
✔ 最佳答案
Unfortunatly, this is so bad that I am not able to fully understand what it are saying.

Therefore I can't correct.


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