Presentation fear???

[第一] Yesterday is my introduce product presentation on my classroom

你是想說昨天你要做一個介紹產品的演講吧,

這句 「Yesterday 是 我在課室對產品的介紹的演講」好奇怪!

我們說 「I gave a presentation on a product in class yesterday.」

- give a presentation 給人演講
- on a product 關於一件產品

「 introduce 」是多餘的 , 你出去演講當然是介紹喇!

「 on my classroom」= 在你的課室上,
那個課室不是你的, 第二, 你不會在課室上面? 在課室裡吧! 課堂裡的英文是「in class」。

yesterday要放在句子結尾，要死記!





[第二]
but no good, I just is only take a paper to read quickly because I didnt completely my presentation Im afraid.


「but no good」 這句不完整, 別人會問是哪裡不好, 什麼不好, 所以改成 「but it was no good」

just 和 only 都解「只是」, 不用重覆說, 改成 ;
「I only read my notes quickly 我只是很快的看了我的筆記」
paper紙, notes筆記, 用筆記會更清楚!


because I didnt completely my presentation Im afraid

「because」用錯位,

completely解「完全地」

I didnt completely my presentation
我沒有完全地我的演講。 ( 你說什麼啊?)

I didnt complete my presentation because I;m afraid.
我沒有完成我的演講因為我很害怕。 ( 對 )




[第三] I always have great fear of peoples face 解你很怕別人的面孔, 難道別人都是怪物嗎?

我總是很害怕在大眾面前說話 = I always have great fear of talking in front of a large group.





[第四] But whole my classmate, I can;t to solve my heart problem

But但是, Although (就算)

Although they are all my classmates, I am still afraid.

classmate眾數, 加s,

說你有心理問題太嚴重了, 好像說你自己有精神病哈哈!!

簡單說你還是很怕就行 ---I am still afraid.





[第五]
I think I dont know whether have other course, I can always speaking to people face each time

I think I don;t know 我覺得我不知道 , 語法錯.
always 後面不用 -ing
speak to peoples` face 向別人面上說? 你說話當然是向著別人面說話啦!!

不如直接將整句改為一個問句...

Are there any courses out there where they teach people presentation skills? (坊間有沒有教演講技巧的課程呢?)





[第六] It better subject is English conversation. (它最好課目是英語對話??????)

It better be an English-speaking course. (最好課程是全英語)

better後面跟 be!





[第七] I will be (主持) if I solved this problem.,I also take to laughing??


I will be a「 master of ceremony」司儀 if I can solve this problem.

不要用過去式「solved」, 因你是展望將來

我還懂笑 ----- I cant believe Im laughing. (我不能相信自己還在笑)




[第八] Could anybody help me for correction?
有人幫我為我改正嗎??? (不通)

Could anybody help me correct this?
有人可以幫我改這文嗎?





無位打成段, ^^:::::: 會補充, 加油!

2009-04-05 11:14:58 補充：
I gave a presentation on a product in class yesterday but it was no good.
I only read my notes quickly. I didn't complete my presentation because I'm afraid.
I always have great fear of talking in front of a lage group.
Although they are all my classmates, I am still afraid.
(續)

2009-04-05 11:15:16 補充：
Are there any courses out there where they teach people presentation skills?It better be an English-speaking course.
I will be a master of ceremony if I can solve this problem. Haha, I cant believe Im laughing.
Could anybody help me correct this?
(完)

2009-04-05 11:18:22 補充：
其實怕出去講有很多因素,
我自己也很怕,
無論說中文英文都好怕好怕,
我一出到去就會面紅, 講野好細聲.
如果你覺得平時講中文okay
咁你就要令你英文進步,
因為好可能你係怕人地笑你的英文,
比d信心自己喇!

I think again I think again, At bottom..002 is good peope, I have in wide world will be happy if I am her friend..加一句知己難求,
我想來想去,事實002真是一個好人,如果她是我朋友我此生都會很快樂,真是知己難求,,
對不起我手快快投錯了票..

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