改善英文作文

You can learn some more "phrases" and "idioms", replacing the vocabularies, that can lengthen your composition.

For example, you can say "As for my personally opinion" instead of "I think". Or else, use more idioms, putting "put your legs into others' shoes" before "think on others' side."

But of coz, the content of the composition is the most important thing of a passage.

你可以從六原素入手,即係who(誰人),where(,哪裡)when(何時),
why(為什麼),how(怎樣),whose(誰的),來仔細記述事情的發生.另一方面你可從事情的起因寫起落筆!亦可以加些形容詞來加字數!