幫我睇下Grammer有冇錯~~~thx~~!!

唔好意思講句
真係無句 o岩
我只可以靠估意思同盡改

第一
係Grammar!

返正題
1) 我估你想話: 大多數人花好少時間於照顧家庭
a)
Most of people... 應作 Most of the people...
b)
...have paying very few time with their family.
你可有問過自己點解要用 have paying? 我自問未見過呢種tense!
c)
pay 雖然解付出, 不過更正確黎講 pay 通常作付錢卻非時間
所以, 成句可寫作
Most of the people don't spend much time taking care of their family.

2) 我估你想講: 你可以花薪金同你的情人去娛樂
a)
money cannot be used but can be spent!
b)
money from your job = salary?!
c)
entertain 解娛樂別人 / 令別人娛樂
在此處並不適用
將佢轉做noun 會更易處理
所以, 整句可作
You can spend your salary on entertainments with your valentine.

3)我估本句意思係:
在那一天, 我們可以收回某些我們曾失去的東西
a)
preposition for day is ON!!!
b)
offset 解補償/彌補
在此處並不適用
應用 regain (收復/回收)
c)
咩叫something about we have ever lost??? 簡直亂七八糟!
成句可作
On that day, we will regain something (that) we have lost before.

1.Most of people is paying a few time with their family.

2.You can use your money from your job and entertain with you
valentine.

3.In that day,we can offset something about we have ever lost.

It's grammer is OK﹒