小六年級英文一問
Yesterday morning .I saw an a accident.It happened near of my school.A small boy was knocked down by a car when he was running across the road.The boy was hurt and he was lying on ground.his mother was shocked.she was in tears.The driver of the car called for the police. In about ten miutes, and ambulance came and took the boy to hospoital after ten minutes.The police took the driver to the police station
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重寫..因為以上既grammar係錯..請指出錯處
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Mm....in your assay, there're a couples of mistakes. I correct them for you already:
Yesterday morning, I witnessed an accident which was happened near my school.
In the accident, a small boy was knocked down by a car when he was running across the road. He was hurt and lied on the ground. His mother was shocked. She was in tears.
The driver of the car dailed for the police. In about ten minutes, an ambulance arrived the accident site and took the boy to hospital. The driver followed the police back to the police station.
Yesterday morning,I saw a car accident.It was happened near my school.A little boy was knocked down by a car when he was running across the road.The boy was hurt and he was lying on ground.His mother was shocked.She was in tears.The driver of the car called the police. After about ten minutes, an ambulance came and took the boy to the hospoital.Finally,the policeman took the driver to the police station.
Yesterday morning .I saw an a accident.It happened near my school.
A small boy was knocked down by a car when he was running
across the road.The boy was hurt and he was lying on ground.His
mother was shocked.She was in tears.The driver of the car called the
police. In about ten miutes, an ambulance came and took the boy to
hospoital .The police took the driver to the police station.
Many useless words are add in this paragraph.Please also becareful
with some careless mistakes in punctuwations or capital letters .
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