小六年級英文一問

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Yesterday morning, I witnessed an accident which was happened near my school.

In the accident, a small boy was knocked down by a car when he was running across the road. He was hurt and lied on the ground. His mother was shocked. She was in tears.

The driver of the car dailed for the police. In about ten minutes, an ambulance arrived the accident site and took the boy to hospital. The driver followed the police back to the police station.

Yesterday morning,I saw a car accident.It was happened near my school.A little boy was knocked down by a car when he was running across the road.The boy was hurt and he was lying on ground.His mother was shocked.She was in tears.The driver of the car called the police. After about ten minutes, an ambulance came and took the boy to the hospoital.Finally,the policeman took the driver to the police station.

Yesterday morning .I saw an a accident.It happened near my school.

A small boy was knocked down by a car when he was running

across the road.The boy was hurt and he was lying on ground.His

mother was shocked.She was in tears.The driver of the car called the

police. In about ten miutes, an ambulance came and took the boy to

hospoital .The police took the driver to the police station.


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with some careless mistakes in punctuwations or capital letters .