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I am a 16-years-old student, and am an International Student studying in LA currently. I want to transfer to your school, BC High. I am in Grade 9. I would like to know what qualification do I need in order for me to transfer to your school? Furthermore, would your organization recognize the courses I am studying right now? By the way, how many International Students do your school have? Thank you.

Hi, I am an international student of 16 year-old & am studying in LA in 9th grade.
I wish to transfer to your BC high school, would you kindly let me have the recruit requirement of your esteemed school?
And I want to know that I had finished some courses (eg ....), are these courses authorized by you?
How many International students in your school?
Thank you.
( Well, 我把部份簡化了些少, 避免單字重覆, 希望可以接受)

You are good. I am 16 year-old students I study now in LA, moreover I am an international student. I want to change to your school BC high. I am attending 9 grades now. Ask, what condition can change to your school to have? Also wants to ask. I already the school had repaired some classes now me, you will approve? How many international student does your school have.? Thanks

if you are writing to the school, you can start with "Dear Sirs,"... but if you are going to have direct conversation with the school personnel, you can start with "good day/ good morning/ good afternoon."
I am a 16 year-old international student studying Grade 9 in LA. I would like to know the entry requirements if I am transferring to your school. Most grateful for your advice if your school would recognise the courses I have taken in LA, as well as the nubmer of international students your school has currently taken.
Thank you very much.
You may use "Thank you very much and I am looking forward to your reply." if you write to the school.
Hope the above helps, good luck!

You are good.
I am 16 year-old students
I study now in LA, moreover I am an international student.
I want to change to your school BC high.
I am reading 9 grades now.
Ask, what condition has to change to your school to have to have?
Also wants to ask. I already the school have repaired some classes now me, you can approve?
How many international student does your school have.?
Thanks

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