請問呢句的grammer 是否有問題

I'm pleased if you could advise your order forecast / planning of repeat order for 2nd quarter of year 2009.

Okay, the grammar of your sentence is A okay. But,
一般商業上的字句不適宜用 I am pleased....
I'll appreciate it if you would advise me your order forecast (planning) of repeat orders for 2nd quarter of year 2009.
Note:
1) I am pleased... - 等於要對方奉承你?
2) forecast & planning / same meaning, you may use either one.

Grammer有問題。
因為句子是以禮貌為先，所以最好以 I would 開始:
I would be pleased if you would kindly advise me your order forecast / planning of repeat orders for the 2nd quarter of Year 2009.

應該是

I will be pleased if you could advise your order forcast/planning of
repeat orders for the second quarter of year 2009

2009-03-26 13:05:19 補充：
這是一般的說法, 對公司中的人說的, 已經很有禮貌, 不用再添加特別的語法, 要不是別人會覺得你是刻意奉承, 有反效果.