sentences corrrect or wrong?

2009-03-23 3:31 am
I dislike Disco place. It's not far from my home. it's noisy. 加一句人多濟迫, it's have a lot of defference color light, I can't saw the way.
I like library place. it's very near my home, this place very roomy, it's has lot of newspaper and magaine. Important I can read quietly.
thank you correct my sentences.....

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2009-03-23 4:39 am
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I dislike Disco. Although it's not far from my home, it's too noisy and crowded(人多濟迫). there are a lot of neon light in different colour, and that makes me cannot see the way.
I like library. It's quite near to my home and it is very roomy. There are a lot of newspapers and magaines, too. Therefore, I can read quietly.
2009-03-23 7:36 pm
I don't like disco. Though its relatively close to my place, its noisy and crowded. It's dark inside and the combination of coloured lighting make me hard to see the room.

However i like the library nearby my place. It's very roomy. It provides newspapers and magazine of different sorts. I can read quietly there.
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