Today is Sunday........I want to make an appoinment with you on next Sunday if you have free time, We'll go to cinema see an excellent film..And go to restaurant eat a delicious dinner. Then, Along your home way go. Walking and speaking..
今天是星期日,如果妳有空的話我想約妳下個星期日出來走走, 我們去看一場精彩的電影,去餐聽食一餐美味可口的晚餐,沿妳回家的路 邊走邊說話,,
.........Can you look my sentences. what's wrong...please..thank you
what's wrong?
2009-03-22 5:54 pm
回答 (3)
2009-03-24 12:05 am
✔ 最佳答案
Today is Sunday........I want to make an appoinment with you on next Sunday if you have free time, We'll go to cinema see an excellent film..And go to restaurant eat a delicious dinner. Then, Along your home way go. Walking and speaking.. 愚見:
Today is Sunday........I would like to invite you to see an excellent movie next Sunday if you have time. Then go to a restaurant for a delicious dinner.
Finally, I'll walk you home and have chatting along the way.
Note:
1) eat a delicious dinner. 錯. 應是: have a delicious dinner.
2) along your home way go. 錯. 應是: along our way home.
2009-03-23 16:07:40 補充：
Correction:
2) along your home way go. 錯. 應是: along the way home.
參考: Own
2009-03-22 6:55 pm
Today is Sunday........I want to MEET with you on next Sunday if you have time, We'll go to cinema TO see an excellent film..And go to restaurant TO eat a delicious dinner. Then TALK WITH YOU ON THE WAY HOME.
參考: myself, zettai correct
2009-03-22 6:41 pm
Today is Sunday. If you have time, I want to go out with you next Sunday. We'll go a watch an excellent film in a cinema, and go to a restaurant to have a delicious dinner. Then, we'll talk when you go home.
收錄日期: 2021-04-25 20:24:15
原文連結 [永久失效]:
https://hk.answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20090322000051KK00383