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I have been out of work almost for four months.
"for almost four months"會好少少~
Actually, I had got several chances of job interview.
應用have got
留意past perfect只在有比較時用~
(i.e. 兩件同樣以前發生~但其中一件發生得再早d~)
However, no anyone to hire me
no one hired me
no 和 anyone 不會一起用~
普通句式中 noun 和 verb 中間也不會有 to (e.g. I to swim)
除非是"There is no one to hire me"
It makes me worry that my money of the account of bank are unceasing reducing.
It made me worried that...
(這些都已經過去[made]~worried = 令人發愁)
...my money in the bank account... (preposition)
...would be unceasingly reducing.
(那時仍未發生[would]~不能兩個adj同用~總有一個變adv. [unceasingly]~)
Fortunately, the situation has change eventually.
...has changed...
My team leader of the company which I had worked before, he gave me a call to ask me to do a freelance about 3D drawing.
這裏had work用得對~因為在他called你之前已worked過~
不過應該是~
My team leader of the company, which I had worked before, gave me a call to ask me to do a freelance about 3D drawing.
which類似補充說明~成句唔要都唔會改變其他句子結構~
所以你原本那句就等如~
"My team leader of the company...he gave me..."
就多左個 he~
(其實兩個逗號可以唔要~加左只係方便你睇~)
Thought I did not know the detail about the freelance job, I still glad to accept it immediately.
...details...
...I was still glad to...
And I went to the place where the client appoints with.
Then, I went to the place...
通常最好唔好用and開頭~(其實then都唔一定要用~)
...where the client had appointed.
你去之前個客已appoint~所以又係past perfect~
appoint一個地方~不需要appoint with的~
I deal the job smoothly and got a good reward through the negotiation.
...got the job...
deal with 解處理 / 交易~
不過你似是得到這份工作多於處理這份工作~
I am looking forward to find a new job at soon at possible.
...looking forward to finding...
looking forward to是Phrasal Verb~
後面跟名詞~所以如果跟動詞就要加ing令佢變名詞~
(e.g. read => reading)
留意名d grammar的用法~
記多d不同句子的結構~~
咁你的英文都會準確d + 多樣化d~~
(不妨多練寫長句子~)
Hope this helps~~ =]
2009-03-18 02:50:32 補充:
留意名d grammar的用法~
*多d