急~~就黎見工..想寫篇英文自我介紹..萬分感謝!!

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2009-03-17 1:49 am

如題~希望有高人指點
我之前寫左篇英文自我介紹,朋友話唔好寫咁多私人野叫我改改佢,加多d工作方面既野..希望有高手幫手更改下~~thanks~~~

原先既自我介紹:
Hello.My name is xxx.I am xx years old and live in xx.There
a 4 people in my family,includind my mother and 2sister and me.In my freetime I like to swimming,reading and working out as well as being on the computer.Thanks for giving me the chance to take part in this interview.I had granded form 5.I am very interested in marketing.I have a cheerful character and I love teamwork.I can also work independtly.I have the sense of responsibility and I have the courage to accept challengs.I hope you can give me a chance to become a member of your company and render services to it.

想加入1d之前工作既野:
我畢業後一直係一間marketing 公司做partime調查員..上年執左04年8月至08年12月
都做左差唔多3年半(<-冇工作證明,因間公司執左,過時又冇拎到..我上司叫我去民政處做聲明,諗住聽日去搞)
之前做調查員既工作:
有街頭問卷,電話問卷,約人出黎做問卷,仲有個係拖住個清潔工去執d垃圾(eg.煙盒)唔知叫咩,&買d野返黎(eg.煙,查d code)調查都係唔知叫咩..
做過有關香水調查,萬寶路調查,迪士尼調查等等..
仲有有時會入下d資料,打電話double check返d問卷咁
thanks你~~

做調查員時都做過幾份工
clerk<-做左1個月,有工作證明
炒散:waiter同廚房都做過,間唔中返下,冇工作證明

thanks very much~~

回答 (1)

Refine.J

2009-03-18 1:05 am

✔ 最佳答案

Hello.My name is xxx.I am xx years old and liveS in xx.There ARE 4 people in my family, WHICH includES my mother, 2sister, and me.DURING my freetime I like to swim,read, work out, AND USE the computer.Thank YOU for giving me the chance to take part in this interview.I haVE grRADUATED FROM form 5. I am interested in marketing.I have a cheerful character and I loveS teamwork.I AM also ABLE TO work independtly.I have the sense of responsibility and the courage to accept challengs.I hope you can give me a chance to become a member of your company and render services to it.

AFTER GRADUATION, I HAVE BEEN WORKING IN A MARKETING COMPANY AS A PART TIME ASSOCIATE. i HAVE BEEN WORKING SINCE AUGUST 2004- DECEMBER 08, WHICH IS ABOUT 3 AND A HALF YEARS. ( sORRY THAT I AM NOT ABLE TO PROOF THIS BECAUSE THE COMPANY HAD ALREADY CLOSED DOWN.

i HAVE DONE JOBS LIKE ASKING PESDESTRIANS TO COMPLETE SURVEYS, PHONE SURVEYS, PERSONAL SUVEYS, AS WELL AS SERVING AS A JANITOR TO SEE WHAT IS BEING PURCHASED THE MOST.

oTHER THAN THAT, I HAVE ALSO DONE SURVEYS ON PURFUMES, DISNEYLAND, AND MANLOBO.

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