✔ 最佳答案
Should mobile phones be allowed?
Your arguments can be:
I strongly agree that students may bring a mobile phone to school because it is easy to let them keep in touch with their parents.
Moreover, a mobile phone is more than a communication device. Students may use it as a calculator or a dictionary.
Conclusion:
From the above reasons, we can see that mobile phones are very useful and convenient tools for students. We should teach students to use them properly, not to ban them.
You should not assume that all students' mobile phones are noise makers. Actually, we can just remind them to switch it to the vibrate mode rather than stop them from using it.
2009-03-17 14:14:45 補充:
以下這段應在 conclusion 之前:
You should not assume that all students' mobile phones are noise makers. Actually, we can just remind them to switch it to the vibrate mode rather than stop them from using it.
2009-03-18 13:12:11 補充:
You're welcome! ^_^
看你的名字, 你是否喜歡 GUNDAM?
2009-03-18 13:13:50 補充:
Conclusion 第一句第一個字要改為 (FOR) the above reasons, ....
2009-03-29 16:14:30 補充:
GUNDAM = 機動戰士
2009-03-30 17:25:27 補充:
但係 GUNDAM 都唔係唔乖喎?
2009-04-03 15:34:49 補充:
離開大學校園有一段時間了, 都係讀書時最開心. 你要好好珍惜現時讀書的機會呢.