taking a mabile phone to schoo

2009-03-15 10:12 pm
Title:should mobile phone be allowed in school?

支持Thesis: mobile phone are nesessamy today.
they are needed for communication and study.


反對:mobile phones are not a necessity.the invention of mobile
phone is causing communication break down between humans.

Arg1:easy to keep in touch with parents.
eg: ................

Arg2:they are useful with furction like calculafor.
eg: ................

Arg3:can be turned off easily,do not cause a distracion.
eg: ................


Conclusion:mobile phone are very useful becuse...........

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回答 (2)

2009-03-17 10:13 pm
✔ 最佳答案
Should mobile phones be allowed?


Your arguments can be:

I strongly agree that students may bring a mobile phone to school because it is easy to let them keep in touch with their parents.

Moreover, a mobile phone is more than a communication device. Students may use it as a calculator or a dictionary.

Conclusion:

From the above reasons, we can see that mobile phones are very useful and convenient tools for students. We should teach students to use them properly, not to ban them.

You should not assume that all students' mobile phones are noise makers. Actually, we can just remind them to switch it to the vibrate mode rather than stop them from using it.



2009-03-17 14:14:45 補充:
以下這段應在 conclusion 之前:

You should not assume that all students' mobile phones are noise makers. Actually, we can just remind them to switch it to the vibrate mode rather than stop them from using it.

2009-03-18 13:12:11 補充:
You're welcome! ^_^

看你的名字, 你是否喜歡 GUNDAM?

2009-03-18 13:13:50 補充:
Conclusion 第一句第一個字要改為 (FOR) the above reasons, ....

2009-03-29 16:14:30 補充:
GUNDAM = 機動戰士

2009-03-30 17:25:27 補充:
但係 GUNDAM 都唔係唔乖喎?

2009-04-03 15:34:49 補充:
離開大學校園有一段時間了, 都係讀書時最開心. 你要好好珍惜現時讀書的機會呢.
2009-03-18 7:04 am
你寫得好好丫
好多謝你,亞ken

2009-03-28 20:29:05 補充:
GUNDAM????

2009-03-30 16:53:46 補充:
i don't like ''GUNDAM''
我係乖乖女黎嘛>~<'''

2009-04-02 19:27:27 補充:
講笑乍...我5算係好乖個類
但係我對ed一曉不通渦....我好少上網搞野
5同你,你應該係對電腦D野好熟,係米??
我見你擅長領域寫軟件乍.. .. .. ..~~

2009-04-03 14:39:02 補充:
容許我知道 你係學生嗎...大學生or 中學生or沒有讀書??
小朋友我只係好奇!

2009-04-04 10:33:57 補充:
原來係大哥哥
你又知我還在讀書??
你出來工作5開心嗎.....(可以同我傾訴喔)......我返而覺得出來工作有一種滿足感,比讀書成就感更大

2009-04-04 11:15:11 補充:
啱啱收到你的 貓貓 訊息,至於依度好抱歉!


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