English..sentence

2009-03-14 12:16 pm
這是我幾日前的自我介紹..但我知道有很多錯,同埋有些句子可以不可以連接起來..變得簡短又通順.........謝謝各位幫忙
Hello, hello, hello, How's everybody? Two minutes pass quickly in my life , but now it's liking longer, Shake shake shake! always shake, I seem jittery tonight. Shake and jitter is my enemies, they always bother me, Let me calm down here, Never be afraid to show it.
OK I start introduction myself, My Chinese name is 陳大文, English name is Raymond, I live in Deep Water Bay, I am now studying English course, This course many question more question, Made me very headache, but I would like to English teacher when I graduates, I wish my work's in Hong Kong College of Technology to become my teacher's colleague.
My job duties include taught student speaking English, And then habit, I like listening to popular music and playing Chinese chess. another interesting thing just surfing internet, thank you..請各位幫我修改 修改,雖然己是過去了,但我仍想明白多些,,謝謝..
更新1:

1.Two minutes pass...這是開場白,,因最少要用二分鐘介紹自己,但這二分鐘在我人生中是很快的過去,但在介紹自己竟然覺得像,很長很長........ 2.This course many.這句簡單些,只是加長語氣,我用了many和 more ,即是我對這 curse多麼多麼的不明???? 3.I wish my work's 這句,,當我畢業後,希望能在這間學校任敎,而這間學校就是重點,因我現在就在這間學校就讀,如果我真的在這裏任敎,這樣我真的成為我現在敎我老師的同事, relation 不同了,不是師生,,而是同事,,(當然這個一定不可能的,,只是笑話,,)

更新2:

2.This course many.這句簡單些,只是加長語氣,我用了many和 more ,即是我對這 course多麼多麼的不明????

回答 (2)

2009-03-14 1:34 pm
✔ 最佳答案
Hey! How's everybody? Two minutes didn't seem to be too much in my life, but now it seems like time passes so slow. I am trembling because I am nervous. Let me calm down a little bit! OK I am going to introduce myself. My Chinese name is 陳大文, and my English name is Raymond. I live in Deep Water Bay and I am now studying the English course. This course has many questions, which made me have a headache, but I would like to be an English teacher when I graduate. I wish my work's in Hong Kong College of Technology to become my teacher's colleague.
My job duties include teaching students to speak English. My habits are listening to music and playing Chinese chess. another habit is just surfing internet. This is the end of my introducion, thank you..

P.S有幾句是我不太明白的::
1.Two minutes pass quickly in my life , but now it's liking longer
2.This course many question more question
3.I wish my work's in Hong Kong College of Technology to become my teacher's colleague.
參考: Myself
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