grammer help- help me change my grammer mistakes?
2009-03-11 2:38 am
Many individuals choose to listen to music while biking because of the function an earplug has. They believe that whne they use earplugs, it can prevent the wind from going into the ear. Other than that, they felt that it could reduce the noise of cars and other's conversations on the streets, which makes them feel calm and relax. Nevertheless, not being able to listen to road noise is dreadful. inviduals is not able to listen to the honks that try to warn them before an accident occurs, which becomes dangerous for many. Earmuffs work as the same function to prevent wind from going in the ears.Inviduals may choose to use earmuffs instead because it has the same function as earplugs (for those who believe that earplugs works for preventing wind from going into the ear). It is more advisable because it can protect the whole ear, and infact, able to reduce the noise level, sufficient and able to hear warnings of others to preven tan accident from occuring.
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2009-03-11 2:46 am
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It's GRAMMAR!!!!!
2009-03-11 10:10 am
grammar help- help me change my grammar mistakes?
Many individuals choose to listen to music while biking because of a second function the earplug has. They believe that when they use earplugs, it can prevent the wind from going into the ear. Other than that, they feel that it can reduce the noise of cars and others' conversations on the streets, which makes them feel calm and relaxed. Nevertheless, not being able to hear road noise is dreadful. Individuals are not able to listen to the honks that try to warn them before an accident occurs, which becomes dangerous for many. Earmuffs work in the same way, to prevent wind from going in the ears. Individuals may choose to use earmuffs instead because they have the same purpose as earplugs (for those who believe that earplugs works for preventing wind from going into the ear). They are recommended because they can protect the whole ear, and in fact, are able to reduce the noise level sufficiently, but still allow the biker to hear the warnings of others to prevent an accident from occurring.
Many individuals choose to listen to music while biking because of a second function the earplug has. They believe that when they use earplugs, it can prevent the wind from going into the ear. Other than that, they feel that it can reduce the noise of cars and others' conversations on the streets, which makes them feel calm and relaxed. Nevertheless, not being able to hear road noise is dreadful. Individuals are not able to listen to the honks that try to warn them before an accident occurs, which becomes dangerous for many. Earmuffs work in the same way, to prevent wind from going in the ears. Individuals may choose to use earmuffs instead because they have the same purpose as earplugs (for those who believe that earplugs works for preventing wind from going into the ear). They are recommended because they can protect the whole ear, and in fact, are able to reduce the noise level sufficiently, but still allow the biker to hear the warnings of others to prevent an accident from occurring.
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