Help me,please!

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Do you think sleeping is good for us? I suppose everybody would say 'yes' .Why? We feel relaxed when we sleep. But I have another important reason, I like sleeping because I can dream .Let me tell you one of my fabulous dreams! It goes like this…

I was a famous artist when I was 21 years old! I had about 1 billion fans all over the world, they were going to love me. I had 3 billion US dollars, so I decided to travel around the world. When I was at the beach in California , I sang a song called 'Fabulous' , which is from my High School Musical2 in the Disney program. 'I want fabulous, that is my simple request, all things fabulous ,bigger and better and best… ' . At that moment, I felt my life was so fabulous! Suddenly, some impossible things happened , my idol, Vanessa Anne Hudgens who is an actress in High School Musical, and she is a famous singer also. She asked me, 'Kathy, how are you? '. I was stunned, I couldn't believe my idol knew my name, we talked happily and became good friends. It's time to go, so we said goodbye and went home…


While I was walking, a fairy appeared. I was surprised, the fairy smiled at me and said 'Kathy, you are honest. So I will give you one wish. What do you want? ' I was so happy ,
I wanted to be a mermaid when I was little, so I replied' I want to be a mermaid' The fairy said' That sounds good, I will make your wish come true now! But you must close your eyes and count 10 seconds, then you will be a beautiful mermaid.
'10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1' I opened my eyes and it was unbelievable! I am a mermaid now and the fairy disappeared …

I jumped into the sea immediately, some sea animals talked and played with me! I shouted ' I love the sea! '

Although I couldn't be a famous artist anymore, I didn't mind.


2009-03-06 04:57:42 補充：
Since I could live and I could do whatever I wanna do in the sea , I was contented that I could have this happy life.

2009-03-06 04:57:56 補充：
Do you want to know the ending of the dream? I can tell you the dream does not have an ending because it's not a fact,

2009-03-06 04:58:14 補充：
but I will never forget it. I remember I had been a famous artist and a mermaid for a night!