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2009-02-27 2:42 am

After watching film. lf l am McDonald seller, l will sell more healthy food. For example, salad, corn and so on. Also, l will cancel the super sizing meal because nobody can eat the whole super sizing meal. Moreover, l will post the nutrition list in the restaurant.

I think fast food contains a lot of fat, salt and calories this is harmful will bring bad influence to our body. For example, the fast food contain a lot of saturated fats that can lead to heart disease such as heart attack. So lf l an bully unless I do not have any other choice, I will go to eat fast food .

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John L

2009-02-27 10:36 pm

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If I were the owner of a McDonald's restaurant, I would be more inclined to offer healthy food to my customers after watching the movie. The healthy alternatives I would offer include salad, corn, and others. The "Super Size" option will be eliminated since the portion is too large for a single person to consume. Nutritional information would also be posted at the restaurant.

I believe that fast food contains a lot of fat, salt, and calories, all of which are harmful to our bodies when consumed in large quantities. Fast food contains a lot of saturated fat that can lead to heart diseases such as heart attack. I would not eat fast food unless I have no other choices.

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