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Please help to provide the D/N for following items
如果用電郵想叫人提供以下物品送貨單
我咁寫有沒有問題?
個the放邊好?放係for the following item得唔得?

the following items <-----------------You need to use" the" here.

to provide someone with something<--------------

the D/N of XXXXXXX

Please provide us with the D/N of the following items. <---



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Please help to provide the D/N for following items
如果用電郵想叫人提供以下物品送貨單
我咁寫有沒有問題?
個the放邊好?放係for the following item得唔得?

I give almost full mark for your original sentence:
Please help to provide us the D/N for following items:
Note: There is no subject in the original sentence.

Please provide D/N for the following items.

2009-02-25 13:37:44 補充：
Please provide D/N for the following items:-

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please provide D/N for the following items: