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Sufferers of bulimia have times when overindulging in various foods and then vomit to get rid of it
1. “have times + v-ing”唔係正統英文0既搭配.你最好避免呢個組合.
2. 你講呢句句子係一個現象,唔係曇花一現0既野,所以應該用simple present tense.
3. “and then vomit to get rid of it”唔清晰. “it”係咩呢?你前面0個句係 “various foods”,首先唔係“it”單數先啦.
我相信你呢句係講暴食症0既定義.我了解過佢定義,幫你寫過.間線部份係斷定呢個症0既關鍵,我建議你要講清楚.
Sufferers of bulimia recurrently overindulge in various foods and, to avoid weight gain, immediately engage in self-induced vomiting on the other hand.
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There are no meaure of threat on certain cancers if we keep on feasting on fatty meat and ignoring the intake of wholegrain varieties .
1. 句子詞義互相矛盾.前半句係講 “無任何癌症0既威脅”,後半句又講 “如果我地係咁狂食肥膩野完全唔食五榖類食品”.我翻譯時已經修改,上半句改為“患癌機會大好多”.
2. 注意 “feast”後加object受詞,因為此處feast係transitive verb.
其他位置我因應句子係咪自然略加修改.
We are at greater risk of having cancers if we keep feasting ourselves with fatty meat, without considering a proper intake of wholegrain varieties.