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I'll never forget the first time I drove the car to go to work.i passed the driving test about 2 years ago.i felt very happy ,because i don't need to get up early and go to work by bus during the rush-hour.

I'll never forget the first time I drove to work. I remember I was in a bad traffic jam and my bad-tempered boss shouted at me for being two hours late for work on that day.( more information here)
Fortunately, I passed the driving test about two years ago.I felt so happy about it because I would not need to get up early and go to work by bus during rush hours anymore.
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1) I drove to work<----------- Simpler and more natural
2) You may try to add more to your work. (the part in orange)
3) I felt ...............I would <--------------- past tense( to talk about how you felt after you passed that driving test)
4) during rush hourS<--------------------------

I would never forget the first time I drove the car to go to work.I
have passed the drivining test since about two years ago.I flet very happy because I didn't need to get up early and go to work by bus during the rush-hour.

I would never forget the first time I drove the car to go to work.I passed the driving test about 2 years ago.I felt very happy because
i didn't get up early and went to work by bus during the rush-hour.