幫忙翻譯一下英文短文～～！

Hello everyone! Today I would like to share my favorite thing with you.
My favorite thing is reading. I like reading because it is so interesting.
Reading can help us to become more knowledgeable.
When I feel bored, I can kill time by reading.
I prefer fiction, usuallly they are interesting and attractive.
For example, the "Harry Potter" is one of them.
Though I like reading, but I don't like study.
I wish that I could have more time to read.
For it can not only improve my knowledge, but also be a kind of entertainment to me.
Anyhow, reading is a favorable thing.
So my favorite thing is reading.
Thank you for listening.

須要更正的部分如下:
1) Holle 拼錯, 更正為 Hello

2) When I boring 少了動詞, 更正為 When I feel bored.
bored 指無聊的感覺
boring 指某件事情很無聊
例: It is boring with nothing to do all day long.
整天無所事事很無聊

3) In sum up 修改為 Anyhow, 較口語

4) Thank you for your listening. your 可略去

2009-02-21 17:09:53 補充：
2)It is boring (sitting there) with nothing to do all day long.
漏打了兩個字

Hallo everyone!
Today,I want to share the most favorite thing with everybody.
The thing is reading.
I like reading because it is so interested.
Reading help us to become more knowledgeable.
When I am bored,I would pass the times by reading.
On account of interestingness, I like books related to novels.
For example,"Harry Potter"is one of the novels.
Although I like reading,I don`t like study curriculum.
I hope that I have more times to reading.
It can increase my knowledge as well as take a kind of entertainment.
To sum up,reading is a beneficial thing.
So my favorite thing is reading!
Thank you for your listening.

2009-02-21 16:19:39 補充：
p.s. 小改一下 "Harry Potter"前要加 the
最後一行Thank you for your "listen".

"Holle everyone! Today I would like to share with you my favorite pastime."
"My favorite pastime is reading. I like reading because it is so interesting."
"Reading can help to build up our knowledge."
"When I am bored, I can read a few books to kill the time."
"I like novels, since they are a lot of fun."
"For example,The "Harry Potter" series is one of them."
"Though I like reading, I don`t like studying."
"I hope I have more time to read."
"Since reading can help to build our knowledge, reading can also be a pastime."
"In summing up,reading has a lot of good sides of it."
"So my favorite pastime is reading!"
"Thank you for your attention."

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