急!可唔可以幫我(番亦)我唔知有冇亦錯..唔該晒

May be this is not an answer, but I want to rewrite the english part I believe it's not 100% correct:
After reviewed, we reconsider the upfront interest from 3% reduced to 1% ($7,000), but the others remain unchange, pls follow up & we will hold this application valid till this saturday.
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After reviewed, we only consider the upfront interest from 3% reduce to 1%($7,000), but remain unchange, pls follow & we still hold this application until to this saturday

於覆核後，我們只能將預付利息由3%減至1%（$7,000），其他款項則不能更改，請留意我們將保留台端的申請至本週六。