Form 5 English Proofreading

The first wedding I went to was a Filipino wedding. __The__ couple , Estella and John, are my sister's friends. At the wedding reception , Estella and John took part _in____ the ___ tradition __of_ Filipino money dance. They danced in the middle of the room. Then John's mother and Estella's father joined the dance and _they__ pined__some_ money onto the clothes of the bride and groom. The rest of the guests __followed__ and they all __pined__ money to the newly-weds . By the end of the dance , Estella and John __were__ all covered __ by_the_ cash !


Is that what you wanted? Hope I have helped you.

the couple, in a Filipinao .., followed, were both covered by cash

don't know about the dance, so can't tell if 'pined' is ok